All Comments on 'Friday Clubbing'

Note to self...don’t read your stories at work...I’m precumming at my cube right now. Right through my pants.

Please continue this story. I got slightly confused between the name change of Ricco to Damien but wonder if it’s part of the FBI job? They have a beautifully written start to a great story. Hope there will be more.

There is several one parts to ricci and price. They are FBI agents. And I use the same characters in all of these just because I like the names.

This was really good! Glad to hear there will be more of these two. I’ll keep checking back for the next chapter. Not sure what the previous annon meant about the names. Maybe that Ricci can also be a first name, but then you did say his name is Damien Ricci. I thought the chapter was clearly written and hot as holy cow!

This series came from a real tv series called criminal minds yeah??? or at least the setting and chracters are

I came up with the idea watching Criminal Minds. But because of copyright I didn't take the plot lines and such. Its just two characters I came up with that somewhat mimic the two from the show with different characteristics and the like.

This story feels so right. Just how it should be. A dominant black man having his way. I loved this story. How I wish I was his bottom.

Perhaps tell the readers the characters full name at the beginning so e don’t keep wondering who the F Damien is. Also why was he screaming out Derek when he came? What a bloody mess.