All Comments on 'Friday Night Fun'

This story seems to be all over the place, no finishes, just starts and stops at the end and the next part (and yes I'm reading in the the author's suggested order) picks up some place different and there seems to be very little to no continuity to them...

I can see the point that Runner4069 is making. If you read 'Heather falls in love' in October 2002, Heather should be somewhere between Madrid and Perth with Ingrid as she goes on her travels. Perhaps she took a break to come back to Yorkshire for Katie's party.

That said, the story was good and I liked it. The good point about this story is Heather having sex twice on Friday night - first in the shower with Jenny at the sports centre and later at the party with Dwayne. And it was good she had sex with a man. Heather obviously likes variety and while the girl on girl action is highly erotic and fulfilling for her and others, she does need a penis inside her from time to time and this was one such occasion.

D Ellerbeck

Lucky Dwayne. Sex with Heather must be so amazing. And there's more to cum