All Comments on 'Friday Night, Saturday Morning'

Quite well-done. Ties directly to the previous story, lovely turn-about of roles.

Why do you have to work anti-English jibes into your stories? It spoiled a fairly good story. We have been your allies in peace time and in war. I'm Scottish, and we have boys out in Iraq just now fighting alongside English troops, US troops and a whole load of other countries' troops against a common enemy. Your anti-English views baffle me.

FYI, two of the Beatles are dead: George Harrison died nearly three years ago.

Now, go do some charity work.

the two chapters go hand in hand.. or should i arse in arse!! very dirty and naughty but you made it sound erotic! cant wait for the next part.. and you're right, us brits do say we're fine even though our world may be falling apart!! xxx

Wonderful follow up to the first. I'd love to see it continue.

You know, you work your readers up the same way you do your "victims"! Start us off slowly, easily, draw us in, then we are totally under your control before it is even realized.

I did like the turnabout at the end, where she took control - quite unexpected, and I hope all your "victims" feel the same way you described yourself as feeling.

As erotic as ch one, perhaps more so, as the newly initiated takes control.

Absolutely lovely. Thank you!

The first part ended with one of the most beautiful and kinky descriptions of ass-licking between two beautiful women. Here, you've outdone it! And Kathy is sweeter, yet developing her own taste for extreme eroticism, while the Sam of the story is as delightfully and bitchily arrogant as she was in 'An American...' I love these characters! And I love your celebration of the female bottom!

OH SAM YOU'VE GOT TO WRITE MORE!!! 😍 ALL OF YOUR STORIES HAVE SO MUCH UNFINISHED BUSINESS... And I really enjoyed your writing style. 😝

5🌟's

Perfectly done!