All Comments on 'Friday Nights Out'

A hot story. I hope you continue this.

Not bad. A little too fast from the second page to the end, but it was a good story compared to the shit we see posted here daily.

best one i have read in a while i loved it turned me on big time

so real , very believable was it? i hope so.

wonderful for a mom and son to have those feelings

Very nicely done - love the way you built up the characters and how you described the love between the characters.

Venus

the word "hers" has no apostrophe - it is not "her's".

You do these short stories so well. Thanks!

Loved the smoldering build up and the way she decided to give in and begin to take charge with the last sentence.

I have got to say that the ending was probably one of the sexiest things I've read in a while. Nicely done

The build up was so great. It was actually so good I wanted the build up to last longer. Thats not a cut down, it's just it was so good I wanted it to last a while longer. Anyway, truelly erotic story. Thanks

Short but hot. Nice development; good details.

Thank You! I hope more chapters follow soon.

this could go for a few more chapters.

The perfect progression of a mother/son relationship. I love how the son takes charge and gets mom to not only consent to allowing him to mount her with no condom but to admit she wants her son to seed her pussy. As this son strips his own mother of her clothes, fondles her soft body, once again licks and sucks on her breasts, he and his mother will progress until mommy lays on her back on her bed and spreads her thick thighs. It is not long until mommy watches as her naked son, his errect manhood leading the way moves over her mature body and consumates their relationship. As his hard cock slips between his mothers pussy lips both will moan in pleasure. With building pleasure the son's manhood will be thrust back inside his pussy over and over until mother and son grunt in orgasm and the young man seeds his mothers fertile womb. With ever increasing frequency mother and son can express their love by joining as one. In a few months this son will find that his new playground is his own mothers body and he will be driven to mount her nightly and leave her womb a sodden mess as he seeds and re-seeds his lover. Mommy will crave her son's lust fueled romps and will dress to tease him with sexy lingere and stockings. Eventually mommy's belly will swell with her son's love child her new son and grandson.

Excellent story. Would have loved to had more description of the sexual act but it's great nonetheless.

Dear Author,

I LOVED the build up! So sensual and erotic! (Could have taken a bit more time and shown the mother needing to get where her son already was.) I enjoyed your style of writing. Thank You for sharing, the readers.

The only huge let down is no one ever gets pregnant.

Nice, much better, you are improving! However, did the mother not have an orgasm? The son seemed to have a short fuse, but you left it hanging there.

That dirty talk was *chef's kiss* Begging him to come inside is so hot. I just hope she's not on the pill and there's a little pregnancy risk; that's always super kinky.