All Comments on 'Friend Needs A Tongue. That's All.'

by usemytongue

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very good start

Fine first story. Your writing is solid, even as you could add a bit more energy to their coupling. Also, is your hero single or unattached? More detail on him and on how she gives him pleasure would be good in your next story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Excellent writing, very hot rad, hop to see more soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wow

So turned on! I wish I could get some guiltless fun like this.

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