by kenkx
You did a fantastic job in my opinion. Your story kept me guessing what was going to happen next, what emotions would come next.
Keep up the good work.
Hot Hot Hot! Very nice job. Even with all the characters it was easy to keep track of who was doing who. Keep it up - so to speak.
I normally find the long ones a big commitment, given that they are often just more of what could have been told in two pages.
Yours, on the other hand, was VERY erotic, and I got into the characters and the story as WELL as the fun! LOL. Good story all around.
You definitely had me going - WAY TO GO, and THANK YOU!
A true rarity round here. A story which is believable and well written with fully rounded characters. Great sex descriptions (although I could do without the shitter stuff) among people with clearly defined personalities. Well done.
Loved it - Good long story, once you get going, it's tough to stop. I like the character building and the belivability factor was there as well. Gotta get neighbors like that.
Completely enjoyed the story ! My wife and I have always made it a habit to be naked around the house and our above ground pool. We have an open invitation to our friends and neighbors to party and it usually becomes anything goes as long as it's consensual. It's always more exciting to have sex with other partners especially with others watching. Good writing...well done ! BARE469
I really enjoyed this one you keep me wanting more. Great job😃
Finally near the end Juanita got her asshole filled, you described it so vividly one couldn't wait for her to receive it anally by Walt; others could have benefited from it too... Great story with many twists