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by Grillmastah

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ChrisTor22ChrisTor22about 8 years ago
you need a proof-reader....badly!!

Good ideas, but NO build-up, no passion, no reason to want a 2nd chapter.... Try again??

WindySwimmingWindySwimmingabout 8 years ago
Yikes!

Fun ideas, but please get help with your writing - spelling & grammar to start. And no, I'm not volunteering.

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