All Comments on 'Friend's GF on the Farm'

You have some editing issues, I don't know if you were in a rush but stuff like " "Come here Sean, I will take care of that for you. Sean, start taking pictures. This time, it is only me and him." She then put his cock in her mouth." Is unclear. Is Sean getting his dick sucked or is the friend? Is sean taking pictures or did you want the friend to be? Also "The farmer who owns the barn told my dad that I he would make a room in the barn if I wanted." Is that I supposed to be there, is that left over from a previous revision?

It is a good story with potential but the language needs to be cleaned up a little. Keep writing, I look forward to more.

I enjoyed your other story but forcing the woman and calling her a bitch stopped me from reading further on this one.