by HVidese
Why are you rewriting Adam and Kyle? Your Friends Til The End is the same as Adam and Kyle. Add something new instead of submitting the same stories under two different titles. That's stupid. -jamie, USA
Dieses ist eine sehr dumme Geschichte und der Verfasser sollte seine Testikel haben trat sehr stark und sehr häufig.
All right! This is a major improvement over the last episode. Much better style and the voice is far more distinctive, instead of the 'generic jock' voice of the last chapter. Nice work!
Please write more chapters!! I'm can't wait to find out who he ends up with.
Read his other series Adam and Kyle and you'll find two more chapters - but the story is still unfinished and stops at an even more annoying place, totally frustrating.
By the way, why do you shout at the writers in all your recent comments? Writing in CAPITAL letters equals shouting, it's rather rude and not really necessary when your comments are angry already.