All Comments on 'Friends to Lovers'

Very hot! Not only did it have the required "dirtiness" and four-letter words, it was very realistic! Great job and I can't wait to read more!

This was so hot and exciting to read! I'm retiring for a bit of "fun" with an old friend immediately. Can't wait for the next story. Keep them cumming!

...as always! You have such descriptive powers, that you can even make someone else's story seem so personal and so tender. You make me proud to have been associated with you, and hopeful to be again.

Damn sexy! Passionate and well edited!

Reminded me of a personal experience, and made me wet all over again!

Honey - great job sweetie! Good structure, good use of buildup to the story. Rings true!!

This is just wonderful. Absolutely absorbed me and put me right inside Bev's mind. Truly top notch babe.

Loved it, Honey!

Just wonderful writing, honey...

I hope someday to become as skilled and talented a writer as you.

Oh and of course, it was HOT!

Loved the story , love your writing , please lets here more of bev and opal , and musch more from thank you

MORE, MORE, MORE!!!

What a sweet, sexy story. Can you tell that I'm becoming a fan? I hope I can write as well about sex and romance as you some day, my new friend. Thank you for another wonderful experience!

You are so much better!!!..I wish I couldt write lengthy like you, for now I am experimenting with Erotic proses :D

Damn can't wait until you come out with the next one. I thought I was good. You had me tingling. keep up the good work

I loved it! I had no idea what a prolific writer you are, honey...

I especially liked how Opal had Bev mirror her movements, more like a mutual masturbation, and added dimension to the story...

One of the best stories I have ever read. I can't imagine any way you could ever top this one - but am eager to give you he chance.

I look forward to reading more of this pair. They really are sexy.

My God, girl. You know what's up.