by candass
little story, thats not at all believable, but at the same time going with the premise and enjoying the hell out of it!
Thank you and keep writing, you have a future in erotica.
.. it was the location - no way! - but still hot.
'Perfect' was overdone - try other superlatives.
Lukas
I always knew you were a sex pot! Interesting reading my best friend's erotic story, but I wasn't surprised at your writing. You go, girl. Make 'em squirm.
-Jo
They might be saying this is unrealistic....but this happened with me and my best friend. We waited to have sex in his car, but this story really reminded me of us. :)