All Comments on 'Friends... with Benefits? Pt. 02'

5 stars and favorited. I love how natural and realistic this story is coupled with the eroticism. More please.

I was hoping you'd write part 2 to this story, I love the realism of the characters...hot, with real chemistry. Well done! Looking forward to part 3!

Awesome hot story! Where have you been hiding?!? Please continue both stories and write many more ;-)

Your writing is electric. The narration is subtle and sensual, like erotica should be. The dialogue is to the point, and not over the top. Nicely done. Let this story serve as a model of good writing to which others can aspire.

Great story, short but very good. Keep up the good work..