All Comments on 'Friendsgiving Dinner'

Could have been MUCH better if only you had tidied it up!!

Sharing wives are for nincompoop WACC husbands

Was it a web site, or a sight? Need an editor.

Would love to see some more. Agree with a few others that it needs a bit of spell/grammar checking beyond what Word or other programs can do...as one of the Anon's posted, "site" would not come up in any spellchecker, but a reviewer hopefully would catch it.

The good thing is you can edit your stories and upload them so it is replaced by the new one.

Great start for your first submission, hope to see it continue!

I know that errors can be annoying to read, but clearly I'm reading right over my own. If anyone would like to offer to edit I'd appreciate the help.

To the guy with guy with the negativity- to each his own.

You need to learn how to write erotic stories, because this one sure isn't. 1*

Fuck the naysayers. Great hot story. Thank you.

Friendsgiving :) I liked it :)

The trouble with a story about a hotwife, especially one who has 'partied' with the host previously, is that there is ZERO uncertainty. She IS going to put out for the host again tonight! Hubby is expecting it and, although a swinger more than a wimp, he will be delighted! If there is ANY question, it is WHY they are no longer maintaining the prior frequency!

I am happy for all three who were pleased, but I was NOT titillated because it was SO predictable!

No. fuck assholes who can't stand it when others dare to have a different opinion.

Good hot story. Keep it up!

Not my cup of tea

A whore sharing what she has and the cuck happy with the leftovers.

I would love to have the opportunity for this experience with my wife of 28years. She'd probably pass out from Cummings so much. Very nice. Keep it up.