All Comments on 'Frigid Brigid the Majorette'

You went thru 11 pages of crap too tell us what????????

You went through 11 pages to tell a good story. Different yet good.

Incredible amount of work but it was impossible to overcome the disbelief that any school administrator, teacher or parent would allow a 16-year old girl to be exposed to cold of 19 degrees or rain, snow or frostbite! Much less that the girl, herself, would be so dedicated as to put herself in danger. Just too far-fetched!

Very exciting

If you liked this story, you can find a continuing of this as an equally good story about the same girl at:

Brigids' new uniform:

http://www.writingsofleviticus.thekinkyserver.com/Donnylaja/BrigidsNewUniform01.html

Good story and exciting I was a trombonist in my day and also enjoyed "helping the ladies" who I felt needed hy help. Warm hands were also ways welcome.

Pretty good story, although the episode with the dog faeces was pretty gross. Brigid dealt with it okay, but it smells in insincerity. The pink slippers were a nice touch.