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I turn my face towards him, brush my hair from my face and say, "You were awesome Mikel, just awesome."
He turns his face towards me and we stare into each other's eyes. You can sense we have growing connection. We chat small talk for a minute, then I get up and tell him I have to go to the bathroom. Inside I wipe my backside and freshen up. I come back to the bed and see Mikel is virtually asleep. I turnoff the hi-fi and turn off the lights as I pull covers over each of us and snuggle sideways my backside to him. He wakes enough to wrap his arms around my waist and stomach as he kisses my shoulder and I lay in darkness a few tears of pure joy flows from my eyes. We both fall quickly to sleep.
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Chapter thirteen to follow soon.
- COMMENTS
Sissy_Chantelover 6 years agoAuthorFirst of all you use the 'he' pronoun which means instantly you look to inflame. The main character Chantel obviously is a trans woman, she would use and expect female pronouns.
Now if you wish to critique that is fine, but offer up a positive critique not some two bit bash of the main character, who in my opinion I've done a lot to develop her character through out the story here. You can choose to not like the story, even the character, but then again why bother following it then?
Anonymousover 6 years agoTurn the comments off. Or develop a thicker skin.
Sissy_Chantelover 6 years agoAuthorReally, do these anonymous commenters have so much time to waste? Why bother to read the story (or any stories here) that you have no interest in? Yes, you have the free choice to post a comment but do you think it stops me or any other writer who enjoys telling a or their stories?
You see I really do not care about your negative comments, without you offering any positive critiques. I only reply back to you here in trying to turn it back on you. I myself DO NOT WASTE my precious time on reading through stories I am not excited or interested about, let alone put up any anonymous negative attacks... I just realize that the authors of said stories are not writing them for me and my interests, but others may enjoy them.
So you can put up some negative without back up or not offer a positive critique here but it changes nothing of my mind as I author this story series. You see I am writing it more as a romantic/life type story where I let my inner feminine mind live sort of vicariously through the main character Chantel and surround her with multiple supporting characters of various depth and details for relevance to the story.
I have a series of chapters for further release here, you DO NOT HAVE TO READ THEM OK? I wrote them and will write any more for first my own behalf of a fantasy I am enjoying and as a result I hope other readers may enjoy the ride that this story series has them on and will keep them on. It's not meant for all persons here, but for those who may have an interest and enjoyment in Chantel's life and those around her.
I feel I bring enough sexual play and heat in each chapter, but add a hopefully good dose of romance and of life with its ups and downs, in this case centered around a person who took the journey to transition to a female and her life with persons around her.
Again if it's not your or any others cup of tea, then please move on.
