All Comments on 'From Across The Bay Ch. 03'

Your writing seems effortless and moves so easily from one lovely thought to another as it builds toward a wonderful climax.

Ms Black,

How lovely your story flowed from your first sentence to your last. Jossy had a weary kind of patience, as she gradually endured to finally achieve her climax. You write with such empathy and understanding. It was a pleasure to read you.

duddle

Hi MsBlack... after reading all 3 chapters back to bacck... OMG... it was Great... And I mean Very Great... ty so much... Luv your work... and please continue... :-),,,, Larry

I think this Lady (MsBlack)... is an excelent writer... I read all 3 chapters of this story sober... I read them 1st while I was drinking... And I Loved them then also... But Sober I got more out of them... I had to think thou... Think hard as you read these... She is a Lady... her stories arent filled with filthy Langage... She actually talks... She makes you think and try to picture whats going on... She is an Angel to me... She is Perfect.... Larry...

Jossy is lovely, worldliness combined with a hint of innocence..... a very sexy combination.

Been eagerly awaiting your new work and you haven't let me down.... You just keep getting better.....Terry