All Comments on 'From Brother to Bitch Ch. 01'

Didn't like this at all. Try again

I can't wait to read about him getting anally raped by a group of guys. The little thumb sucking sissy deserves it.

Ok, I will try my best to add more details into the second part of this story... and humiliate poor james more...

Wtf is this? Borat porn!

good start of a great story cant wait to see if brother becomes more of a dog to his brother and friends....

hope part 2 is out soon...

would like to discuss more with you... you can contact me at amislaaf@gmail.com if you wish....

good story. Can't wait for more

I posted the next part today.. it will take some time to get approved.. :) enjoy buddies

it is my wish most my life to be my Brother's dog i love Him so much. your storry gives me hope

And later that night, James pulled out a rusty boxcutter and sliced off Vito's dick!

The next day he went to campus with a pipe-bomb and sawed-off shotgun... after killing several of the faggots he covered the ones he only crippled in gasoline and burned them alive...

Police never figured-out who committed the crime... then James raped and murdered that stupid cock-tease.

Also, who gives a shit about him sucking his thumb? Literally nobody would care in a fucking college. Story would make more sense in high school.

Wish it was meets

Quite literally THE shittiest thing I’ve ever read. Just stop.

I like it a lot pls continue, you write really good. I would love a part 2.