by wordsforsex
Although I don't really agree 100% I want to delete this, but do not know how. :/
It figures that the person who didn't like this story wouldn't have the courage to sign in. I found it fairly erotic but then again I like it when a man is forced.
It figures that the person who didn't like this story wouldn't have the courage to sign in. I found it fairly erotic but then again I like it when a man is forced.
OK writing, but ends with a fizzle. Definitely needs something more.
This is the most dull and boring story of power exchange there ever has been. The couple who are supposed to be participating are so selfish and uninteresting I tried to read this and could barely skim through it. Better luck if this ever gets re-written.