All Comments on 'From One Night Ch. 01'

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mekakymekakyabout 15 years ago
great start

can't waut for more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Not bad...

A bit rushed tho. Cant wait to see how it progresses. Cat

soularsoularabout 15 years ago
Nice beginning...

Keep it up;-)

Soular

fluerfluerabout 15 years ago
FANTASTIC START

I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Nice short story

Realistic and revealing. Keep writing the stories of your experiences.

NS11NS11about 15 years ago
First of many....

Hopefully, this is the first of many chapters. The start was pretty good, and I am definitely interested. I really hope you continue. Great start!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Nice

Good start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very good

Hot.

AzaliaAzaliaover 11 years ago
I like it but

You don't use protection for a one night stand? You luck this is a fantasy lol

ladiebrowneyezladiebrowneyezover 10 years ago
its alright...but

shit happening too fast face fucking in the club not knowing the guy then fucking no condom one night stand, not my cup of tea

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