by arbitrarily
I loved your story. The pacing and settings were all very well done. I was hard the whole time reading it!!!
Very enjoyable well written and great narrative.
Let's hope this is not a short one time thimg .
Well, it's a nice erotic story. In only hope there will be a suite. Long live Sophie!
When it's always about fucking, it's a pleasant surprise to hear about a simple, true connection. It's always the characters I connect more with than the story. Congrats!