All Comments on 'From Russia with Love'

Proof Read, Proof Read, Proof Read!!

We were naked. Spent. I kissed her eyelids and the tip of her nose.

punctuation. kills. fluency.

that aside, you describe scenes, you don't live them.. no emotional involvement at all.

Interesting to note that aarskever feels competent to critique this posting despite never having contributed anything himself.

Despite his and the anonymous comment, I thought this was a real nice cock-raising story.