All Comments on 'From Sales to Gym Ownership'

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ag2507ag2507about 9 years ago
I liked Sara

Gutted that you dropped her, I was looking forward to reading more about her when I started this story - mind you, leaves open for the other girl he met on the cruise to serendipitously turn up...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
great read

great read and build up towards what can happen

Looking forward to the coming chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
not bad

could of had a much better ending

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