All Comments on 'From Straight to Gay'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good Story.

Very realistic descriptions and feelings. Like many things after the first time it becomes easier and more enjoyable. Abbie will want to see the action

robertreamsrobertreamsabout 6 years ago
edit!

You are in great need of an editor. Some of your errors are so large they cause a year or two of nuclear winter, removing all traces of a plot. Still I gave you a five. Talent is rare. You should take it seriously. You should never let your name be seen on something you haven't bothered to finish.

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