by SilkPantyGirl
Amazing , well written , really enjoyed your story , you should write more ! & soon !
Among the best I've read in a very long time. Very sensual indeed.
Nicely done. Good descriptions. I don't agree that she went too fast. Most guys that age cum easily. No reason to tease them and she didn't want to anyway. They can cum over and over as they later proved. Nice narrative by a woman who really likes sex. Well done!
Very hot! I hope you'll continue to write and post here at Lit.
I love how fucking the first guy is just the start. Love the way you kept upping the intensity.
Great first story! Hope you have a series with this character, maybe something like the Daring Reporter series, and the same author's community theater series.
What a hot story! Written extremely well. 5 stars! The first story I have favorited in quite a while.
What a great beginning this first story makes. This hot, well-written story effectively immersed this reader in the action as soon as it started. You make it sound completely plausible from start to finish. Did I mention it was hotβI am incredibly aroused. Please keep writing.
Well u definitely earned ur star's from me love!!!! Amazing!!! Bloody Amazing!!!πππππππππππππππ 5 stars no question there. One request...
KEEP WRITING THESE!! Please. Lol
I very much enjoyed your encounter with the virgin boy. I think you could have finished your story there. This Stacey came out of the blue, we didn't know why or what were her motives, and a completely different story begun. By the way, "you" should have charged the other guys to have you. Anyway, thanks for you story.
So you start off by stretching believability when you state that she is a beautiful brainy engineer and canβt find a job because sheβs just too hot. That doesnβt even make sense. Then she is silly enough to pay $50 for a number without even guaranteeing sheβll get the job. Then some random chick just appears with no explanation and they all have a huge gangbang. Ridiculous.
How come most moaners are anonymous. If the beginning was unbelievable why carry on reading it, I can never understand that. Personally I enjoyed most of it, I won't pretend it was perfect, but how many stories are? I just wish I could get my pussy eaten whilst being covered in lots of spunk. Anyone wishing to take me to task over these views, my email address is Catherine.32@yahoo.com
Ignore the criticism from the sad trolls. You're an excellent writer.
You are a very, very good writer! The story was short, fast-paced and well-edited. I saw only one error, a capital "i" instead of spelling out "One." That's impressive here. As a contributor, I know that the nasty comments are the ones that stick. Delete them. Just look at the number of views your story chalks up and know that you helped a lot of people get off with a satisfying quickie and a new private fantasy. The people who write negative comments often can't string together a coherent sentence without grammatical and spelling errors, let alone proper "punkchewashun." Thank you for taking the time and making the effort to entertain others as much as yourself! xoxo Kandy