All Comments on 'From the Balcony'

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lescargo2lescargo2almost 11 years ago

I dont like stories of rape dressed up as "erotic couplings"......real perverted

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hot

I like it. I thought the build-up was super hot and the end had a nice twist. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Check the difference between ...

'breath' and 'breathe'!

"She heard Mike breath an answer ..."

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