All Comments on 'From the Beginning Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Crude

Thats all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Oh my

Girls will be girls, and I did enjoy the story.

sensuallensensuallenalmost 16 years ago
A delicious beginning -- do continue!

Mmmm... this story was an excellent teaser for what I trust will be a truly steamy tale. Well written with a compelling plot and hot sex -- my only possible complaint is that there wasn't enough of it. Part Two soonest, we beseech thee!!

willy9ishwilly9ishalmost 16 years ago
first class

Loved this story do continue to write more!

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