All Comments on 'From the Boardroom to the Bedroom'

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biphilmassbiphilmassalmost 6 years ago
Great start writer!

This is easily a 3 to 5 chapter story. If you could flesh out the relationship between Amanda and her dad and Steven that would be terrific.

5 stars *****

WatcherRobWatcherRobalmost 6 years ago
Excellent

Predictable but enthralling. Detailed without getting so awfully,, well sometimes leaving something to the imagination is good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Five stars

Loved every bit of it. I hope Steven proposes soon!

ROBERTODAVOROBERTODAVOalmost 6 years ago

A pleasant-enough story, where we move easily from the office to the bedroom in about three easy stages, and we are conveniently kept indoors by a raging storm outside. I greatly enjoyed reading,

robertodavo a.k.a. Robert Davidson.

blackpython9blackpython9almost 6 years ago
Believable

I like the slow build. This is about relationships as much as sex .. and the sex is good. Can't wait for more.

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