by writerartist
This is easily a 3 to 5 chapter story. If you could flesh out the relationship between Amanda and her dad and Steven that would be terrific.
5 stars *****
Predictable but enthralling. Detailed without getting so awfully,, well sometimes leaving something to the imagination is good.
A pleasant-enough story, where we move easily from the office to the bedroom in about three easy stages, and we are conveniently kept indoors by a raging storm outside. I greatly enjoyed reading,
robertodavo a.k.a. Robert Davidson.
I like the slow build. This is about relationships as much as sex .. and the sex is good. Can't wait for more.