All Comments on 'Frosteen'

Good story, nice spin on it.

solid character development; typically, difficult to do in a short story, and frequently not done well. Good pacing, nothing felt rushed or hurried.

Realistic dialogue and interaction between the characters. A lot of times, writers will overlook the small things people say or do when interacting, or just moving through life. It's the small things which make a story come to life.

Overall, a very good job. Thanks for sharing your imagination and talent, and especially thanks for all the work it takes to put out a first rate story.

Regards,

GeoD

I followed a link from the SciFi portal to Frosteen, so I haven't been to your submissions page, yet. I hope I'm not disappointed and find this is your only story! But, something tells me, as talented as you are, it is not.

Cheers

Good story. I want wait your story The bra salesman new chapters. The bra salesman is the best story at literotica.

Now that the contest is over, I wanted to say thank you to everyone who voted for my story. Win or lose, I appreciate your support. Thank you as well to those who wrote.me personally with your kind words. Happy Holidays to all!!

Your feelings and sex read more like mutual masterbation than any true passion. Snow girl was just a slut. No connection at all is able to be made to these shallow and pointless characters.

Excellent!!!!!