by pacifist91w
Carry on writing but for goodness' sake, STOP translating feet and inches into centimetres and metres. Nobody flipping cares. If it matters, they will try and translate it themselves. As it is, it is really annoying and it spoils what is a good story. We don't need a math lesson. We need a good read. Which you are giving us. WITHOUT the math.
I enjoyed the story and give some stars using words like vulvae. How many people know a women's genitals consist of more than the vagina?!
I really enjoyed the story. I hope there is a part 2. I also thought it was thoughtful translate the meters.
The scope of your imagination is impressive; blending less than positive natural human behavior (looting in a disaster--albeit of "rich people's" houses)--with an understated appreciation for beautiful natural creations so often overlooked in stories such as this, you developed an erotic connection mimicking "human sexual interaction" while quite deftly keeping the tantalizing fantasy of the "different" at such a level that one is left with an intense desire for "more". The natural world is rich with possibilities for such connections to a writer with imagination and talent like you.
Please provide!