by Valentine_Satterlee
Always knew there was something
amiss. They must hurry up with that
damn time-machine so you can go
back and re-write the whole thing.
Life as we know it can only turn out
for the better. Shot for a shot at the
possibilities! Hehe.
I see you are a believer who's flesh and spirit war one with the other.
You think that maybe lucifer was the victim. God seems kinds evil. HORRAY FOR LUCIFER. New chapter
New twist to the very old story. Sooooo you think that the comrade Lucifer is a romantic, or at least started that way. Ha???? Maybe. Regardless, enjoyed it very much. THANK YOU.
Hello,
I just read your story. I have been reading stories on this site for quite some time and I must say that this is definitely a story I would recommend.
Your imagery is rich and your prose is effortless and fluid. I believe you can be a very good writer in this community...
Good Luck!