All Comments on 'Fuck Morality - Sona's Story Ch. 01'

This story is badly written alomost like some grade school kid did it. Maybe the author needs to attend grade school and learn the basics again.

I think you need help from an editor or someone experienced with writing text, this story is among the worst i've read on this site...

I did find a couple of gramatical and spelling mistakes. Nonetheless, beautifully written. You have a unique style. Characters are alive and nasty.

Mera nam Pooja (33) hai, gori, sundar, 5 ft 4 inch, 36-34-36. Pati school teacher hain, ghar sasur ne gaon ki thodi jameen bech jar Kanpur mei kharida tha, jo unki mout ke bad hamare kaam aa raha hai. Meri ek beti Mamata (14) hai, jo 8th class mei girl school mei padti hai. Mujhe bete ki bahot jarurat thi, kyonki Pati bhi kamjor aur dabbu sa hi tha. Pati se to bete ki umid nahi ho sakti, dusra kaha se milega? ye hi sochti rahti. Ek din beti school se share- auto riksha mei louti, us din driver Mamata ko utar kar agey jaane laga to driver pe nazjr gai to dekha koi 45-46 sal ka kala, acchi body ka admi tha. Mene Mamata se bola ki tu driver se bol de, jisase agar koi bazar ka kam ho tu ya mai ja sakte hai. Wo boli thik hai. Ab mai kabhi kabhi Mamata apne room me jati to mai driver ko kabhi chai, kabhi sharbat deti aur usase bat karna shuru kiya. Wo shayad meri vasna samaj raha tha kyonki Mamata ko utar kar wo mujh se bate karne lagta, muje maza ata. Ek din Mamta ki saheli ne kaha ki uski b'day hai, to mai Mamta ko 9 baje tak allow kar du. Maine kaha tum saheli ho to 9 kya, 11 baje tak ruka lena. Fir to ye shuru ho gaya. Driver ye bol ke ki masterji to laate ate hai, isliye unke aa jane tak mai ruk jaunga, Asal me Pati ko juye ka shouk tha. Maine kabhi driver ka nam nahi pucha, bas Bhai ya, Bhaya bol deti, wo muje Bhabhi bolta. Ham hansi majak bhi karne lage the. mene ek din usko bola muje kabhi-2 nind nahi ati akele mei. Do tin din bad wo goliya laya nind ki, bola bahut halki hai shayad nind aa jaye. us rat mene goli li to gahri nind ayi suba tak. Kuch din bad Mamata b'day se bahut jaldi aa gayi sar dard se. Mene sar dar ki goli ke sath ek nind ki goli bhi pila di. Pati 11 ya 12 baje tak atey aur us wakt 9 bhi nahi baja tha. Mai sari utar kar rat ka purana gown pahan kar driver ke pas ayi. Mene badan dard ka bahana banaya. eb bar pahle bhi ye bahana banaya to driver bola thodi malis kar dun to thik ho jayega. mene sharma kar nahi bola tha. aaj to mere man mei hi...., isliye han kar di. hum dono chat ke andhere kamre mei gaye aur mai jamin par dari bicha kar keti. bra aur chadi pahni thi. mai ulti ho kar let gay. usne apna kurta utara tab mai puch mombati le ati hun light ke liye. Usne na bola to ham kafi andhere mai hi lete rahe. usne pith pe thoda sa tel le kar malis shuru ki, jab bra pe hath pahuche to usne malis ke bahane piche se bra upar kar di. Mai kuch nahi boli, thodi der bad chadi niche kar di, mai fir bhi nahi boli. Wo utha aur 5 minut bad muje laga wo pajama utar kar mere upar let gaya. Thodi der meih hi ham dono garam ho gaye. Mai ulti hi leti rahi aur usne jango ke bich se apna kafi bada lund meri chut mei ghusana shuru kiya.Mai dard aur maje se aa, uuuiii, haye , dhire karo na, bolti rahi maje mei. 15 min badd wo jor jor se chodne laga, aur mai pagal ho gayi aur adhe ghante bad usne pura lund andar dal kar mere upar let gaya aut uska virrra meri chut mei bharta raha. Ab wo lund, chut ki bhasha bolne laga aur muj se bhi jid karne laga. mujhe sharam thi isliye mai nahi boli. Mai uth kar bathroom bhagi. safai ke bad Mamata ko dekhne uske kamre mei gayi, to dekha wo so rahi thi. Driver ke liye sharbat le kar gayi. Usne kaha abhi aur maje karenge kyoki muje malum hai wo so rahi hogi, tumara Pati bhi 10 baje nahi aata, use ye nahi pata hoga ham chat pe haii. muje nangi hi utha kar khade khade hi lund par bitha kar choda. Mera dard se aah uhhh ki awaz nikal rahi thi. Meri jid karne se usne lund khich kar nabga khada raha, mai ek bar aur bathroom gayi. Lout kar ayi to dekha wo nanga hi dari par baitha tha. hath pakad kar mujhe bhi nanga andhere mei bitha liya. Apna mota aur lamba lund mere hath mei de kar bola, ise thoa sahla de fir chusna. Mene apne pati ka patla s 4.5 ya 5 inch ka lund 3-4 bad chusa tha aur fir wo thoda sahlane se apna pani chod deta tha. iska lund to lohe jesa garam aur mast tha. Mai sahla rahi thi tabhi bahar ki halki light mei dekha uski lund ke upar ka topa nahi hai. Mai janti thi Musalman ladko ke bachpan mei hi kat dete hai. Mai gabhrate huye boli Tumara nam kya hai. Wo bola Makbul. Mai boli mai to tume Bhai bolti hun, aur fir wo bola hamare logo mei shadi bhi ho jati hai. Mai use bilkul dur nahi jane deti, kyonki uski chudai ka maja mai soch bhi nahi sakti thi. Meri garmi bad gayi, mujhe uski jat ki parwah nahi, mujhe to har wakt uska lund lena tha. Ek din Mamata ne hame chat par jate aur fir chodte dekh liya. Ham tino ne do-tin din bohot bat hui, Mamata bhi chudwana chahti thi, iekin itta mota lund to le hi nahi sakti thi. Makbul ne akele mei mujhe bola ki nere 3 beta hai, isko pahle sab se chote se jo 13 sal ka hai aur jiska lund 6 incd se bada hi hai, usase chudwa lenge. Mai boli 6 inch itta chota bhi nai hoga. Maknul aur mene bat ki to usne bola ki thode din tum Yasin se chudwa lena Mamata ke samne, fir usko chudwa lenge. Ye bat final ho gayi. 4 mahine mujhe Mamata ke samne chod kar, beti ki seal Yasin se tudwai. Bad mei uske tino beto se bhi pahle mai chudi fir Mamata. Aaj se 7 mahine pahle in logo mei se kisi ka beej mere andar pal raha hai