by Abaddon89
I like reading about trans women. I like reading about incest. I like reading about trans women engaging in incest. Despite all three of those facts, this still left me shaking my head and wondering what the hell I just read. I don't typically leave negative comments, but I couldn't help but think you needed to know just how far removed from enjoyable this "story" is. Sorry to come down hard on you, but please take some time to rethink this thing. It's a mess.
This is just a diary letter by a girl who wants her daddy. It has nothing to do with the title. Are you sure this is titled right? That said, it was a weird, waste of time.
So the title was misleading and it wasn't really a story so much as the exposure of a daughter's erotic feelings about her daddy.
It deserved better from you "critics"
The writer obviously has talent as demonstrated by the good rating of their previous story.
there's no story here. It's just the girl's fantasizing - which is OK, but as others have said, only a diary entry without the actual presence of the Dad. How does he feel about all this? Offended? Angry? Eager?
I found this to be quite lyrical. It is like being immersed in a sex dream,
It's certainly not your typical story, but I found it to be highly arousing, all the same.
Nice job, Abaddon89, on giving us something different and out of the ordinary.