- Gay Male
- Fucked Up Ch. 02
- Page 2
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Click hereMy mind was full of nothing but the thought of his cock, my cock, and Todd's jock-clad arse. I didn't realise until later that I had stopped even thinking about Sara, even though we had also made love only the night before. My rough treatment was, if anything, making my cravings for man sex even stronger. I not only steeled myself to swallow my assailant's load, I wanted it.
At that moment, he let go of my head and yanked his cock out of my mouth. I was left looking up at him from a position of total subordination, upon my knees, with a couple of streaks of drool mixed with precum dripping from the corners of my mouth and down the lapels of my suit jacket. He put his dick away and zipped his flies back up.
"Not yet, Ryan. Not yet. Gentlemen, please show Ryan to the master bedroom. Ryan, you will strip naked and leave your cheap, soiled rags in a neat pile outside of the bedroom door before entering. Some fresh clothing has been laid out for you on the bed. You will shower, then put the clean clothes on and wait for me to join you. I have some business to conclude first, but will arrive in exactly twenty minutes. Be ready, or you will suffer the consequences. Gentlemen, this time ensure that he follows his instructions with regard to clothing, there is to be no repeat of the disobedient episode with the shoes."
The goons frogmarched me to the relevant door, and I took off all of my clothes. There was little point in resistance: these guys were far too powerful for me, and besides I had begun to take onboard what the blackmailer had said about knowing my place. I had shat on my marriage, I did have a rubbish, second rate career, and I had so, so enjoyed being made to get down on my knees and slurp on that fat cock. There were smirks from both guards when I pulled down my trousers and the extent of my arousal became genuinely obvious, although they disappeared when I slipped off my grey Bike jock and stood there naked, with my full ten inch erection on show for them to see. Perhaps, in at least one facet of my degraded manhood, I could still impress? I opened the door and walked into the bedroom, and it was closed shut behind me.
Soon, any remaining notions I had of returning to my former life, as if none of this fucking mess had happened, were to be stripped brutally away.
- COMMENTS
ruggerjockladover 8 years agoAuthorTo MatureWild
Fair enough - but some of us enjoy sweating it out from time to time ;-)
MatureWildover 8 years agoEverybodies a critic.
I can say with certainty that I read worse...much worse.
Your story delivered a hot scenario, and I'm looking forward to seeing what developes.
ruggerjockladover 8 years agoAuthorTo RfoxRfd:
Firstly, your critique of my writing skills would carry more weight were your grasp of grammar not so tenuous. The clause 'better luck next time' would sit much more comfortably as a stand alone sentence or, at the very least, separated from the preceding clause by a semicolon.
Secondly, this is gay pornographic literature we're talking about here. There is only a finite amount of room for originality in a genre where the broad thrust of the story (if you'll pardon the pun) is to convey the reader from one sex scene to the next. What do you expect, Tolstoy? Moreover, given that there are thousands and thousands of such works on this website already, it's bound to bear some similarity to some of what went before it.
Thirdly, if you thought it so predictable then why did you (presumably) read right the way through to the end and then waste additional time typing a short, lazy and very poorly written review? Are you some kind of masochist or something?
I reckon that some people just enjoy complaining for the sake of it.
RfoxRfdover 8 years agoWould have preferred a less cliched story better luck next time.
aclassyladyover 8 years agoThis is an interesting story and I would like to see more please. Would like to know if Todd shows back up or if his wife is behind all of this he is now going through.
