All Comments on 'Fuckin' Soldiers Ch. 01'

I read this story on Smashwords some time ago, Loved it then, Love it now

**GREAT**

Eagerly awaiting Chapter 02

about the correctness of military nomemclature?

This is porn. Great porn! Five star pornography.!!

And it has universal appeal to the prurient interests of lesbians, bi's and straights alike.

I hope this talented writer continues to contribute to Literotica.

I like fun "tongue in cheek" stories... And I like love stories... And I like hot/sexy stories... So this should have been a trifecta for me. I waited to comment because I couldn't quite figure out what I didn't love about it... I think it has to do with April. I know this is a story, and I know that the girls are young in the story, but it just makes me sad that the love the shared (since they were ten years old!) was cheapened so easily. Maybe the next chapter will pull it together for me.

Can't wait to read part 2 if this great story. Keep up the great work

Mmm, loved the build, the lust and the outcome... Bring on the sequel.

Sure, it's pure fantasy, but it's HOT pure fantasy!

This story was meant to be humorous, correct?

I would like to know what happens next. Please....