All Comments on 'Fucking Amanda Ch. 01'

A good story introduction and start, but needs more story to get a real feel of what the story is about. What is going to happen next? Thanks.....Rich

This was pretty hot stuff until it got to the end and removed all possible reality about the situation.

Great start to a story that could have many possibilities. I hope that you will find the time to continue this story and allow all the human emotion to play out.

Pretty standard story, been told many times before.

SarahJayne55:

Nevermind the naysayers; I think it is a good story with a great deal of potential. There are so many different avenues that you can travel in this offering. The daughter and her girlfriends, "Dad" decides the girlfriends have to pay him the money back, etc...Unlimited...

Don't rush yourself. Remember, you are writing for your "audience" here. And be advised, some of those in that audience can be very unrelenting.

Keep up the good work, and I will keep an eye open for Chapter 2.

michael

Really good story. Keep up the good work.

While a bit erotic, this was just a little more than rape, influenced by drunkenness. Did she happen to get pregnant? I note that no birth control was mentioned....

Good Job. Next time just add more details to it ..><