All Comments on 'Fucking Amazing'

I take this as a "promise" of more to cum. Please don't hesitate too long before your next entry.

I like it! Nice and sensual. Only one spot I had to check where it looked like there was an extra word. Lot's better than my first story, which is the only posted so far.

The story was good but I read it 3 times and can only assume that he is the mature one. Am I correct? Maybe in the beginning when you described the charaters you could have included their age. Waiting for part 2.

Thanks to everybody who is taking time to read over my story and comment on it. Means a lot to me as a first time poster for short stories. I am completely okay with any constructive crit. I didn't realize until after I had already posted the story that mature was age related once I posted it I was hitting myself in the head. Neither one is Jamyson is 26 and Bay is 23. I didn't know what else to put it as either. Should I re-post this story under something else? Or just be careful with future stories?

Hey all! Part 2 is coming soon, I wrote it and it was pending to be posted but it got sent back because I forgot to take the italics and bold off. So I took it off and now I'm waiting for it to post again. Hope ya'll like it.