All Comments on 'Fucking Folks'

by ajtemmens

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
an excellent story by a first-time contributor, but...

I think that young Josh still is unfulfilled. I mean, the kid's got a thing about his father's heavy loaded daddy-balls, and he knows that his tight little asshole craves to be stuffed and stretched by his father's fat veiny daddy-dick. And of course no boy can be fully satisfied until he shoves his young cock up between his own mother's legs and blows his young balls up the same cunt he came out of. Maybe in this talented author's next installment?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
More

Please add to this great story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
"' Didn't bother going home for Memorial Day."

Uh, I think you meant Labor Day. It's either that or he was in funk over Thanksgiving, Christmas, Easter/Spring Break -- basically for about 9 months.

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerabout 9 years ago
YOU QUIT TOO SOON!

This story demanded at least 2 pages to be rated over 3*s. Too much left unanswered.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowabout 9 years ago
I'll be keeping an eye out for more of this story...

Please, please continue it.

Morlan502Morlan502about 9 years ago
More

I would have to agree that this was a fine story but that it was a bit short. More about him and his folks could be a fun read. But then it is your story!

ajtemmensajtemmensabout 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for your comments. You're quite right. Josh and his parents have more territory to cover. Working on it now. Also, I really did mix up Labor Day and Memorial Day in the fuck frenzy.

In the meantime I'm trying to put out another story this week that's led to a number of orgasms. I hope you have a look. Maybe you'll find something in it that turns you on.

Cum for peace,

a.j. temmens

peebudypeebudyabout 9 years ago
deliciously nasty!

great story. I love how randy the mom and dad are. looking forward to them adding some pee play to the festivities. well done. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Please write more

Love the story and love the peeplay but I really want to read more about it in the second chapter that I presume you will write

al4blackal4blackabout 9 years ago
Wow

Great story of family sex would loved to experience this with my mum and dad.

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
there are so many elements to this story

being this short does not do it justice.

It doesn't even ask the questions, let alone provide answers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
well done, erotic family taboo tale

love, love, love family incest tales, they are truly the best and the most diverse!! loved it, want more!

grouplover12grouplover12over 7 years ago
WOW

WOW. Wish there had been more. Really hot story.

Love2SpurtLove2Spurtover 6 years ago
Absolutely love this story. Thank you

I really love the fantasy behind this story. I've read it a few times now and still come back for more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wonderful fantasy!

Close to my own fantasy. Thanks for the great write!

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGover 2 years ago

Hot and super erotic.. one of the best on Lit... loved it

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Brilliant but too short

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