All Comments on 'Fucking Magic - A Potion Problem Ch. 01'

This is cool though it is sad that his ex got her potion drunk by jason on accident.

Very good. More, please?

It's not bad, bt I would suggest limiting it to no more than 4 parts as people will lose interest if it's any longer.

Loved this! Looking forward to more.

This was so hot! Well written and realistic (obviously this is fantasy and incest so it's not really realistic but I guess I mean the dialogue is realistic-not cheesy or over the top like so many other stories with similar themes-I didn't roll my eyes once!) Can't wait for the next part-please write a chapter 2 (and hopefully several other chapters as well). Really like the plot so far. I liked how the son is a normal guy but who has sort of an alpha male/animalistic side to him as well. I like how the mom is a hot milf but isn't portrayed as a perfect body who looks like she's still twenty something. Again, great job!

A very yummy start! I'm looking forward to more of this story. Thank you.

Hey, I thought the story was great! Really looking forward to more chapters! I saw that you don’t have a regular editor and have been blown off by them before. I would love to edit some stories for you. I could edit chapter 2 or whatever your next story is and see what you think.

So I skimmed it, hopefully I'll remember it for later, since I have so many other things to read here and elsewhere.

My question is can Westley, now getting empowered show Jessica what she's now missed out on? Also, is there going to be any increased effects from the love potion sitting around for so long? Maybe you could get it to spread from Westley's mom to Jessica to get her drunk on the effects, and bouncing on Westley's lap before she can even try to look up how to 'cure' his mom? It'd be funny to have Westley have Jessica at the end, with her being a love slave, but completely aware of what's happened and just not caring, because she's loving the sex too much to want to stop , or counter it

Also any odds of the girl from the hardware store popping in, that'd be an interesting event for her, since she's had a crush on a celebrety that she likes that, she feels looks like Westley.

Did it get reposted?

Great soncest in a story that doesn't take fanciful beyond the imagination. Great description of mom being attractive but not unbelievable and same with Leelee. Can be a wonderful continuous read.

Above average! Sequels are bound to be planned. I plan to watch for them as I enjoyed this author's writing.

this was freaking gold i love it the Dirty talk was amazing great work can't want for more

hope you add sister in the mix

I'm wondering why you resubmitted this story. I know I'm not the only one who noticed this.

Sorry, there was some technical issues with the name of the story. When I submitted Part 2 it forced a changed with Part 1 to "Ch. 01". The next part will hopefully drop tomorrow, after that I'll try and keep to 1 Chapter a week.

Whether this was {re} issued or not . I enjoyed it .

I could see a sequel with the sister involved but this , to me , should be a thing shared by Mother and Son alone . Maybe

wow good start

A little too much prattle that was nonsensical and difficult to follow. Still and all. I gave you 4*

Setting up a lot! Hoping for a big pay off!

This was written badly in some parts in thought I was having a stroke