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All Comments on 'Fucking Magic - A Potion Problem Ch. 15'

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dlj403dlj4036 months ago

Thanks for keeping on with this story!

abogdonovabogdonov5 months ago

Please, please, please don't stop here! I'm hooked. I have to know what happens next! Your sex scenes just keep getting better. Also, I'm loving the way magic works in your world.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

This was a good story, but dear lord was it painful to read. PLEASE start using names when you write dialog, especially with more than 2 characters and especially since you seem to break up lines arbitrarily. Slowing down and actually describing what is happening would also help instead of rushing through it so we as readers don't know wtf is actually happening.

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11/21/23 - Fucking Magic 15 Submitted. Hopefully in time for Thanksgiving. Part 16 is a real evolvement and is finished and half edited. The series might go to Part 18 or 17 might be really long with an Epilogue. 9/6/23 - Fucking Magic 14 submitted and coming at you in the n...