by Toru
Not bad, not bad at all. Really rather enjoyable. I'd read a second chapter, if you wrote it. In fact, I hope you do, because I'm sort of tired of being the only one posting Doctor Who fics here! Keep up the good work!
Kurokami
I liked how you started this story however I have to say your choice of time period was not the best personally and it certainly isn't the time i would have chosen to go back to. I mean you have the chance to go to any point in the whole of human history and get with any woman you want and you decide to go back to the time of Adam and Eve! Why? I'll grant you there is a very small chance of not getting it on with Eve considering she has you and Adam to choose from. However apart from that why else would you do it? I am hopeful that this is the begining of a series due to the title you have chosen making me think that maybe Eve is not the only woman in your time travelling hit list. I certainly hope she isn't at least.
the Doctor can open the TARDIS by clicking his fingers:P
... that I didn't investigate that.
http://tardis.wikia.com/wiki/TARDIS_key