All Comments on 'Fucky Friday'

Good story. This is definitely a very unique twist on the freaky friday/body swap story.

If I were Delilah, I wouldn't tell him how she did it, it will keep him in line in the future.

Loved it! Crazy sexy erotic fun!

And well-written, too!

LOL. Weird. But I enjoyed the strangeness of it. Thank you. Cheers.

Getting the "writing skills" aspect out of the way--you can check off all the Writers' Workshop criteria as having been well and truly met; you dotted all the "I's" and crossed the "T's", paced out plot development to lead with anticipation toward conclusion(s) both of the physical interaction between the two protagonists and the psychological adaptation on the husband's part as he became "personally" familiar with very important aspects of his wife's physical and mental "states of being" both as a woman and in particular a smaller physically weaker woman dealing with an insensitive (though loving) "semi-brute" of a husband claiming all his "male prerogatives" as being clearly entitled to them regardless of his wife's emotional and psychological state.

(Whey! Quite a run-on sentence there--hope it was decipherable.) So, kudos on establishing both the plot setting and the personalities quite well.

Ending this chapter (hopefully not the story) at the point you chose was both adroit and masterful in terms of building anticipation for the plot to continue developing. What would the wife inflict upon the husband in the near term? Would his psychological state change from simply being acutely aware of all his wife had been feeling in her relationship to him? Or would he possibly grow to really enjoy the factually established reality that women actually do have greater pleasure from sexual interaction--and perhaps entreat his wife to either extend this current body exchange session or schedule return engagements on a periodic basis? Would the wife (realizing just how much SHE enjoys playing the dominant role in the relationship) be just as eager to create future exchanges even though she would lose out on physical pleasure while gaining in psychological dominance? Would she be more willing to explore additional sexual adventures, knowing SHE would be/could be the beneficiary both in physical pleasure and psychological personal acceptance of who she was in all her different emotional and physical exploration--knowing her husband would willingly follow her lead for his own pleasurable benefit? Plot possibilities keep occurring to ME as I keep typing--but it's YOUR STORY!

This story has quite a number of plot development opportunities; regardless of how or where you choose to take the characters (and us)--you have a winner. Thanks for sharing your creative imagination with us.

(MUCH) More please!

MLJ

I love how all my "Uhms..." and "Buts..." were drawn together in the ending paragraphs! Well manipulated by the character's oblivious beliefs and totally unexpected, the ending was pleasantly explosive! It also provided an sudden window through which to establish a clear view of their relationship from another angle. 5 stars!

FUCKING BRILLIANT!

YOU have an amazing gift.

I would love to have a Deep conversation with you over a drink, or several.

FUCKING BRILLIANT!

A part 2 please.

I liked the role reversal, using the same lines worked well with it. The scenario was very enticing, but I was a bit let down by the sex scenes, I'm not sure why.

A 5 star in my thoughts. Looking forward and hoping for the next chapter

Wow, looking forward to the next chapter. 5 stars.

MMMmmm Excellent Story.. Please.. Write MORE...!!!

Oh yes this is truly a great story line. The possibility for other chapters is almost end less. Couple ideas; 1. one she had stopped taking her birth control pills and will let him go though a hole Pregnancy And Birthing. 2. She not planning on ever swapping back, so she turns her in to a cum sucking slut slave and rents her as a slave Prostitute for Income. 3. She get her nipples and clothes hood Pierced Big gold rings, and then her male get his nipples pierced too and a Prince Albert (PA) piercing also. 4. She knos it's only a Temporary swamp so she gets a High security Titanium chastity cage put on his cock and hides the key. 5. has a BBC come over and have him watch his male ass fuck while video recording it for future blackmail when they swap back. Just so many more Possibilities..

This was satisfying on a variety of levels. The double orgasms were fantastic, but I should probably process and discuss the baggage associated with it with my husband and my therapist. Fair to say it triggered a good amount of resentment and sadness I'm aparently holding on to at the moment. Good job!

[Alright, I'm going to respond to as many comments as possible with this comment, because I appreciate the support so much! ❤️]

@DanDraper: I'm glad you noticed the "Freaky-Friday" reference. I don't know how popular those movies are today, so I'm glad to see you got it. Delilah definitely has plans for Anthony. She loves him, but she isn't above a little physical and mental manipulation.

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@Paul4play: Thank you Paul! You're one of the few people who supports both my prose and my silly poetry, so I'm glad to see that you liked this one!

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@LenardSpencer: Haha, yes this story is definitely WEIRD, but I'm glad you liked it!

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@Anon-MLJ: You clearly put almost as much thought into your comment, as I did in the story! Thank you! I love seeing my work resonate with readers. You've considered various paths that this story might take, and you've honestly come (sort of) close to my plan. No spoilers! 😁

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@evebroughtanaxthistime: I'm glad that I was able to answer all of your questions and concerns within the story! And I'm so glad you liked it!

@Roy_L_Flush: I really appreciate your kind words! I love hearing from fans, and I have contact info in my bio, if there's ever more discussion that you're interested in.

@Anon: I have a devious plan for part 2, although it might be a bit before I can post it. We'll see. I'm pretty happy with the critical reception that this story got, so I'm almost certain I'll be posting a 2nd part.

@igorio: I'm glad you enjoyed parts of this story, and I'm sorry the spicy stuff didn't satisfy you fully. Lol Perfecting the erotism of prose is an ongoing task, and I'm always trying to improve. Hopefully my next story will be even better.

@Anon: Thanks for the 5 star! Based on the positive reception of this story, a second installment is all but guaranteed. The only question is when. Stay tuned!

This was a fun if slightly nasty twist on the body change trope. I'm surprised you didn't make Anthony "Samson," considering how deftly Delilah removes his strength!

Karma's a bitch!

Nice symmetrical reversal. Looking forward to more.

[Alright, second wave 😁]

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@Anon: Thank you! I'm looking forward to showing you what I've come up with for the second installment!

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@Dommasterjim: I appreciate the support, and I definitely will!

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@Anon: I'm glad you liked the story line! Also, Damn! Those are some wild ideas! Heck, what I have planned might even come across as *Mediocre* by comparison. 🤣 But I'm sure if you liked this one, you'll like the next instalment, so stay tuned!

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@Anon: I'm so glad this story satisfied you! I write my stories with the knowledge that it will challenge readers and myself (I've written claustrophobic scenes, in spite of my claustrophobia, etc). But while I cannot act as your therapist, I will say that domination/submission fantasies are not necessary unhealthy, provided you don't let them consume you. Thanks again, and stay tuned for more!

Wow! I wasn't sure in the beginning of this story of how awesome it turned out to be. You are a truly wonderful gifted writer! I'm really hard to impress, but this story is over the top! I'll be looking for the next chapter.

I also liked "woman's world" I'd like to see the next chapter on that series .

@panaflora: The Delilah/Sampson naming idea is something that I didn't even consider! Lol that's a good one, though. The only problem is, while she drained his strength, she GAVE him long hair... And that's opposite from Sampson. Haha

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@djrip: I'm glad you appreciated the reversal! And stay tuned, there is definitely more on the way!

is was ok, not much for the RAPE scenes, does wife realize after they swap back it is HER ass that is going to be hurting not his ? haha.. she probably not thinking that far ahead

@rjr_1954: I'm so glad that you enjoyed this story, and I'm looking forward to sharing the next installment. I promise, I haven't given up on "Women's World"! I've been so busy with life and other projects, but I thank you for reminding me that Women's World needs some attention too! (I wrote about 50% of "Learning in a Woman's World," but I was dissatisfied with the result, and I had to shift gears for a bit.) Rest assured, Blake, Erica, Yvette, and Terrance will return, it just might take a little more time 😅

this story is fantastic you are very talented Please continue with this story thanks!

@Anon: Well I'm glad you liked it some. I understand that you aren't into rape scenes, but that leaves me wondering, "Why did you decide to read a noncon story?" Oh well. To answer you other question, Delilah does have contingencies planned for the future, but who knows if they will work out for her? You'll have to wait and see.

It would be great if there were one of these body swap / feminization stories without the word "delicate" or pointing out how "feminine" some body part is. This isn't really a criticism of this story in particular. It seems like it's some sort of cargo cult writing where everyone just copies it from what came before. Really weird and completely unnecessary.

But please no pregnancy stuff like someone suggested. That's another one of these terrible cliches. It's not shocking, but completely predictable at this point.

I wonder if Anthony, trapped in his wife's body, realizes how _fucked_ he is? Delilah, in the stronger male body, can do absolutely anything she wants to him. Anything.

Because what's Anthony, a woman, going to do? Go to the authorities? Delilah can just switch back and be the victim! He's the one on video making the threats, matching the semen stains, whatever, while his lovely wife begs for mercy, right there on the camera footage. As long as Delilah doesn't inflict more harm than she's willing to endure the aftereffects of, of course.

Compared to what Delilah could get away with (anything), some one-on-one assfucking (with lube!) and sexual domination are nothing. Nothing! Tony had better put out and pray his juicy pussy is enough to keep Delilah satisfied.

Also I'm loving the anxiety twist. As you write, Delilah is probably high as fuck on the combination of newfound male strength, hormones, sudden freedom from anxiety, male sexual desire, ability to force a weaker person to submit, and a very reasonable lack of concern over her partners feelings. Also revenge- it's entirely possible that Anthony had previously done stuff like he did the night before. Maybe not quite as bad- but that was definitely not the first time Delilah found herself crying after sex.

Anthony is going to pay for his misdeeds, that's for sure. And Delilah is going to enjoy watching the misery on his lovely face. Although the fact she's let him come already indicates she's quite a bit more generous than he was.

@Anon: Thank you for calling me talented! Sometimes I agree with you, but sometimes I see the amazing work of other authors, and I realize that I have so far to go. So I appreciate the support 😁

@Anon: Calling the female body "delicate" and "feminine" may be super common within body swap stories, but that doesn't make it cargo cult writing (at least not in this instance). I know this, because I've only read one other body swap story, and I can hardly remember it. And to answer your other concern, my current plan is for the next story to take place the following day, within a single day's time. That means there won't be any confirmed pregnancy... At least not in the next installment.

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@Anon: Anthony probably does realize how fucked he might be. Both he and Delilah are fundamentally flawed individuals. But that doesn't necessarily make her a monster... although she could be. You'll have to wait and see. 😁

Ignoring the sex (which was solid), I'm just happy the wife got her comeuppance on her jerk of a husband haha. Nice job!

Let her bang the crap out of her body...get her really angry by hitting her etc so she beats the crap out of her body. Then call the cops

@Anon: If Anthony called the cops, (as far as he knows) Delilah could just switch the bodies back, leaving HIM in prison. But regardless of that, Anthony has stated several times that he DOES love Delilah... Their relationship probably isn't as healthy as it should be, but just like she didn't want to see him arrested, he doesn't want that for her.

@Anon(some how these replies got out of order)

It was fun to make Anthony get his comeuppance. Thanks for your support

Very cool story. I have fantasized about swapping bodies with a woman - and the only place you can is in a story like this. Thank you for writing it and I look forward to the next episode!

@Anon: Thanks! I think everyone has imagined what it would be like to swap sexes. It's a fun idea to explore in fantasy, and hopefully you'll enjoy the next installment even more than this one!

I loved that story. I don't know about other guys but I've alys wanted be a woman for a month. Just so I could take it out for a test run so I would know what it feels like.

I would love to see an additional follow up to this. Very funny

@B3ndover: Hey I appreciate it! I think people have always been curious about what the other sex experiences, even before the Greeks wrote about Teiresias and his gender-swaping experience.

Next chapter?

@Anon: I'm working on the next chapter (along with some other projects). I'm hoping that I'll be done by sometime in April 😁

The idea of swapping sexes is great.

The rape is not.

@Anon: This is a noncon/reluctance story. I don't know what you expected.

But to respond to your criticism more directly: in real life rape is horrific... Fortunately, this is an absurd, fantasy story.

Murder is also horrific and worse, but somehow the horror genre persists. Strange. 😆

Oh well. Have a nice day.

Well, simply brilliant. There have been other swapped body stories but I think this one stands out so far. I did not like that he forcibly raped her but he was a bit remorseful afterwards (but only a little bit). That she was able to swap out their bodies and he/she raped his/her ass was better in the since he was experiencing what she was feeling as she was being raped. I do hope that she switches the bodies back but only after keeping his body for awhile. I like the idea of getting a cock cage and then hiding the key before swapping bodies. Maybe she switches right in the middle of a gangbang, or gloryhole, then maybe he finally gets the idea that he needs to be more loving toward his wife. The options are endless so I do hope the author explores a lot of them before making a more permanent switch.

@Anon: Thanks for the compliment! I've only read a couple of other body swap stories (the myth of Teiresias included) and I'm glad to hear that mine measures up well.

Anthony and Delilah are both selfish, flawed characters... but they do care about each other (although perhaps not as much as they should). Anyway, I hope you enjoy the second installment "Sucky Sunday" which just dropped. Thanks again for reading and commenting! 😁

Great story dont add a third party of swinging glory hole or gangbangs theres enough cuck shit for the sluts and simps, these 2 love eachother a third party would only ruin it.

@Anon: Not to get into too many spoilers, but you and I are on the same page. Anthony and Delilah are both flawed characters, but they are both in love (even as unhealthy as that love may be, sometimes). Delilah is jealous enough that she didn't even want Anthony at a party with strippers. The idea that she would be okay with another woman or man joining in their relationship is incredibly inconsistent with the characters as I've established them thus far.

The wife planned to swap bodies with the husband to have her dominant sexual way with the husband in her female body during the sex. How would a woman treat a female while using a male’s body? I suspect forced oral to show him how it feels to surrender to a face fuck. The anal sex may be her way of capitalizing on the swap, and show him how rough he is with her.

@Anon: Have read the sequel yet? If not, I have great news!!! 😏

Late to the party, but bravo. Brilliant role reversal and excellent twist. Didn't see it coming at all.

Well played.

@Djmac1031: Thank you! This has always been one of my favorites! I really appreciate it!

NEAT STORY!!!

@ctguy552000: Why thank you! I appreciate the praise!

Brilliant.

@Anon: Thanks! 😍

Well written. More please.

@Anon: Thank you! I'm sure you know that this story has a sequel, "Sucky Saturday" but the third installment is planned, but not yet penned. Hopefully I can get it done before too long. 🤭

Really good story and a clever premise. However, at least in part 1, Anthony did not get punished enough for raping his wife. The asshole deserves more and I’m hoping he gets it in part 2.

@1Martiniman: Thank you; 😊 He definitely gets more punishment in part 2, and I'm curious to hear your thoughts on it

Rough start to the story and since rape is not my thing, I almost stopped. However, the subtitle about a gender swap had my curiosity up so I kept going. Loved the description of the exploration of the female body. Would be interesting if you had similar details of the exploration of the male body or even a different sequel from the other person's perspective (but that might be a stretch for you).

In any event, it seems your writing focuses on non-con which I normally won't seek out but so far, this is an imaginative, fun story.

Thanks.

@mfj77: I'm glad you gave this story a chance in spite of it's dark themes. My NC/R stories tend to have unrealistically light endings, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Honestly, I think that a story from Delilah's perspective would be really fun.