All Comments on 'Fulfilling My Fantasy'

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CleevedreamsCleevedreamsabout 6 years ago
Scene setter

I love the way you build excitement

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Short and Sweet

Impressive development of tension is such a short piece. Fun use of her point of view to keep us wondering.

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