by Dru_Druthers
Really good. I hope to see more stories by you, and to read more about these two...I really like the dynamic between them...one party being more dominant is hot.
This is a lovely story and I hope that this is the first in the series. If your stories are as good as your poetry, then we're all in for some fabulous times. I look forward to reading more!!! Well done!
Waiting to read your second story while I write this. My hopes are it is as good as if not better than what I just read.
I know we like to day "always leave them wanting more", but this felt somewhat incomplete.
Very short, would have benefited with a bit more back story.
Still pretty good, though!
Still good for a first story. I actually read "Hidden Desires" first, and you definitely grew as a writer!
Fuck. This was an amazingly written first story. It made me think of my wife who is out of town on business.