All Comments on 'Fulfilling Our Desires'

by Dru_Druthers

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BahamaBahamaover 11 years ago
Great

That was a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
well done

Really good. I hope to see more stories by you, and to read more about these two...I really like the dynamic between them...one party being more dominant is hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Brilliant First Story!!

This is a lovely story and I hope that this is the first in the series. If your stories are as good as your poetry, then we're all in for some fabulous times. I look forward to reading more!!! Well done!

chipcarverchipcarverover 11 years ago
Awesome first

Waiting to read your second story while I write this. My hopes are it is as good as if not better than what I just read.

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 10 years ago
Too short

I know we like to day "always leave them wanting more", but this felt somewhat incomplete.

DCohen2349DCohen2349over 10 years ago
Agree With Sbrooks

Very short, would have benefited with a bit more back story.

Still pretty good, though!

KarenEKarenEabout 10 years ago
Definitely Could Have Been Longer

Still good for a first story. I actually read "Hidden Desires" first, and you definitely grew as a writer!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Amazing

Fuck. This was an amazingly written first story. It made me think of my wife who is out of town on business.

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I've become an avid reader on Literotica and have been frustrated on more than one occasion when a story (a good storyline and plot) starts and then the author seemingly disappears without finishing. As I have begun posting my own stories, I alway try to finish my story before...