by Evil Alpaca
Wow. Amazing stuff. The fact that there is actually a driving story besides mindless fucking makes the whole thing damn rewarding. This is good shit.
A good story that can stand on it's own, the sex just adds to it. I look forward to the next chapter.
how soon can we get the next chapter? This story could definitely hold it's own in any genre... you have talent, but hurry!!!
As always your stories are wonderful, I really loved Lost in Texas and this story is going a completly different path, but is still amazing.
Great story so far, has some really nice potential as well. Looking forward to the next chapter soon!
You are one of the best writers on this site. Can't wait for the next installment!
Just noting - that comment wasn't meant to be 50%, I just forgot to click the '100' radio button...
The story is engaging and original, the romance is touching and authentic, and the sex is HOT.
Can't wait for more!!
*wild applause*
Nothing like breaking new ground with realistic characters and an epic love story.
This really built on the first chapter.
Well done!
This story is a perfect mixture of so many elements, it is impossible to list them all. Excellent tale with characters that really come to life. Keep the chapters coming!
I hope you think of actually writing a book on this series, it is amazing, then e-publish it for donations!
this made me very happy-- them finally hooking up. you made me anticipate it badly :D
...unless a guy's involved. It's a well written story, this segment is not my cup of tea. Hope more group or man action gets into play...when it comes to character's their dialogue and a description of the scenery and action...you're fucking good. I'm a Laurell Hamilton fan, so it should count...
Anybody coming here and then complaining about the G-G action obviously doesn't know this author very well.
I agree with the last comment. Mixing things up is what EA does best. It's another winner in my humble opinion. I'm off to read the rest. Many thanks to EA for sharing.
5 stars . Found one small mistake. In this sentence
"moving it until he was placing pressure against Jane's wet mound" he should be she...
Also this story is kind of a prequel to It's a dead man's world and to Dust to dust as events here are mentioned in dust to dust. I am still trying to work out the whole chronology... Has someone already done that ?
Fabulous ...... Ever so slowly its hard to find words for your talent I haven't used before ...... Ten stars minimum ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️