All Comments on 'Fun at the Mechanics'

Nice shitty art, totally killed my horniness.

Agreed

Can't even think of a good comment without being unkind. I'll just say that your crayon drawing was a buzzkill. When I was a kid, my fellow grade school classmates would pass around drawings of this quality around the room involving supposed sexual things. In literotica I am not looking for realism. But as a reader I am looking to not have my intelligence insulted. Illustrated? Butchered is more like the word.

This story made me HOT