All Comments on 'Fun in the Sun'

by marksthldn

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Know the target audience

Lost me at John's age. In his 60's.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Wonderful!

Your story is told like you actually lived it! Turned me on to no end.

FlexibilityFlexibilityabout 7 years ago
Very sexy story!

I did enjoy this sexy story! Always good to read one set in the UK too! Takes me back to when I used to wander around my parents' garden in my late teens - and one of the neighbours saw me...

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