by firebird68
I find the characterization and character development to be unrealistic, but the sex is hot enough to not care. Keep up with this one, you've hit pay dirt.
First I'd like to say I love your stories. However, the most enjoyable thing about them is the non-consent aspect and also how realistic they used to be. This one was still good, but not on par with the previous chapters. Hopefully you'll go back to the roots. Thanks for writing this and keep up the great work!
Been following this series since the first chapter, absolutely love your work. Keep up the great work!
This series has made me cum over and over again. Please continue. Build a great story.
I have been reading this over and over for the last 3 days. The first time I read this I got so wet and horny, I had to resort to using a curling iron as a dildo (I have no toys). The best (or at least my favourite) sex story forced or otherwise, I've ever read. Love, love, love it!
"Like a shot baby. One prick and it will be in."
You saying I'm a needle dick, bitch? haha
So the “Luke and Laura-style” rapist-victim “lovers” decide to recruit a new victim? And anal with a big dick and no lube? Not entertaining, and an unneeded addition.