by coyote3k
Noncon and rape is not BDSM. Please recognize the difference.
In the noncon section this would be fine. With changes this could be a good BDSM story.
what does this have anything to do with bdsm he abuses this young girl and yes 20 is young and there is no telling how long he has had her and to have her sleep in a tiny little room with only a pillow and blanket and a can to shit in how is this fun? sick and disgusting and the writer really needs some serious therapy
People take a lot of issue with this series and I don't know why. I like the story (and yes I'm a girl). It's the noncon section, it's not going to be fluffy. Just because someone is portraying a kidnapping and rape/sex slavery as it would actually happen, not the usual handsome strong man in the dark alley who makes the girl eventually swoon doesnt make it bad. There's nothing wrong with that usual fantasy and there's nothing wrong with this because its fantasy. If its not your fantasy then don't read it instead of discouraging an author when others might enjoy the story like I did.
Loved the beginning, especially since it's being told from the Master's point of view.