All Comments on 'Fun with Cindy Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Noncon and rape is not BDSM. Please recognize the difference.

In the noncon section this would be fine. With changes this could be a good BDSM story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
what?

what does this have anything to do with bdsm he abuses this young girl and yes 20 is young and there is no telling how long he has had her and to have her sleep in a tiny little room with only a pillow and blanket and a can to shit in how is this fun? sick and disgusting and the writer really needs some serious therapy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
AWESOME STORY

Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Dark and intriguing

People take a lot of issue with this series and I don't know why. I like the story (and yes I'm a girl). It's the noncon section, it's not going to be fluffy. Just because someone is portraying a kidnapping and rape/sex slavery as it would actually happen, not the usual handsome strong man in the dark alley who makes the girl eventually swoon doesnt make it bad. There's nothing wrong with that usual fantasy and there's nothing wrong with this because its fantasy. If its not your fantasy then don't read it instead of discouraging an author when others might enjoy the story like I did.

SummerRose404SummerRose404about 9 years ago
Of to a great start!

Loved the beginning, especially since it's being told from the Master's point of view.

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