All Comments on 'Fun with the Folks Next Door Ch. 05'

This is definitely a fun read. Thus far the series has been an artfully erotic tale of delightful depraved tale of imagined incest and sex. A good read.

My only caveat would be the frqeuent use of all caps to portray the inner thoughts of the main character. The comments are short and tend to break up the flow of the text without contributing of lastingly erotic value to the story, IMNSHO. That aside, I can't wait till the next installment(s).