All Comments on 'Further Adventures of Susan Adams Ch. 02'

by SteveLee1146

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Disappointed

I am very disappointed with this "short" story. You spent so much time building a tale of eroticism and character and have abandoned it to a slutty adventure with no form or substance..."A tale full of Sound and Fury and signifying Nothing"!!!!!!!!

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